5 minute free write I did starting from this quote by Proust


Marcel Proust - "The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new lands but in seeing with new eyes."

in seeing with new eyes I might see you, not callous
and cowing, not overwept, fake smile gleaming, in
seeing with new eyes I might invent, new ides in seeing
with the march, that which I march, prepositions
of marsh, the real voyage of discovery is less
than a voyage, not even a good book to read,
someone sitting down at the coffee table, pillows
and all that long spat of news, if this was your
voyage you might wake up, I could even find
you, aishiteiruyo, ndifuna kupita kupita kupita
base, eti, somebody stole what I asked for in bread
line, but I'm trying to forgive, to get past the
point where you tell me where I'm from and I
tell you there's somewhere to go, we're late, let's
get a move on. I'm renting the car, go wild,
we haven't got 5 minutes.



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so... like a lot of things I do. I write, then decide what it means or what I think of it.

but I wanna' do that with this one and some other recent few things.
so any point to cut - let me know.
let's just chop chop chop till we have the one or two useful words.

thanks yo